PsychologyPersonalStatement.com
by Dr. Robert Edinger
Helping Applicants Since 2005 
drrobertedinger@gmail.com

Sample first paragraph for the Master's Degree in Clinical Psychology

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Example 1: I hope to be seen as a strong candidate for your competitive MSc program in Clinical Psychology at the University of ____ because I have always excelled as a student, especially in my Psychology classes as an undergraduate student of Psychology at ____ University. I also have excellent personal preparation not only academically but also as a volunteer serving long hours in critically important positions of support to some of the most vulnerable members of our society. I am extremely highly motivated to excel in your program at ____ University to become a practicing psychologist, helping people to overcome their psychological issues and meet their challenges successfully by regaining positive perspectives and attitudes through therapy and counseling, and medication if needed.

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Example 2: I will be completing my undergraduate studies in Psychology at ____ University this coming May, 2015. I hope very much to be accepted to begin your distinguished Master’s Program in Psychology at ____ University so that I might continue studying in my chosen professional field. Throughout the course of my undergraduate studies, I have learned, to put it in the words of my favorite professor: “how to think… not what to think.” As a result of learning from her and many other professors, I am now able to critically assess clinical research and what it means to be a good clinician. What I find most exciting about Psychology is the constant sense of self discovery, the ongoing understanding of one self and others, the smoke behind the mirrors. I seek lifetime immersion in the study of the motivations resulting in justifications, and why we act in the complex ways that we do, often for reasons of which we are entirely unaware. 

Crafting a standout personal statement for Clinical Psychology can really set you apart. Here are some tips and strategies to get you started:

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Tips for Writing Your Personal Statement

1. Start with a Strong Opening: Capture the reader's attention from the beginning. Share a compelling story or an impactful experience that ignited your passion for clinical psychology.

2. Be Authentic: Your personal statement should reflect who you are. Be honest and genuine in sharing your journey, experiences, and aspirations.

3. Highlight Relevant Experience: Discuss any academic, professional, or volunteer experiences that have prepared you for a career in clinical psychology. Highlight any research, internships, or clinical work you've done.

4. Showcase Your Skills: Mention the skills you've developed that are relevant to clinical psychology, such as communication, empathy, analytical thinking, and problem-solving.

5. Discuss Your Goals: Clearly state your short-term and long-term career goals. Explain how the program you are applying to will help you achieve these goals.

6. Reflect on Challenges: Share any challenges or obstacles you've faced and how you've overcome them. This demonstrates resilience and personal growth.

7. Personalize Your Statement: Tailor your statement to each program you're applying to. Mention specific faculty members, research projects, or aspects of the program that align with your interests and goals.

8. Stay Professional: Maintain a professional tone throughout your statement. Avoid slang, overly casual language, or irrelevant information.

9. Edit and Proofread: Ensure your statement is free of grammatical errors and typos. Consider asking a mentor, professor, or friend to review it for you.